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考研英语复习资料:考研英语作文范文批改(330)

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考研英语待批改作文:
Dear Bob,
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last mouth. I read it everyday and intended to finish it this week. Unfortunately, it was nowhere to be found last night. To solve this problem, I would like to get a new book for you by Express Mail Service. And if you need it right now, how about your buying a new one in your local bookstore and I will pay for it. For this irrecoverable lose, I am to blame. If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. Sorry again for my careless. Looking forward to your reply.(右下)Yours sincerely, Li Ming
   
   考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Bob, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the book you were so kind to lend me last mouth. I read it everyday and intended to finish it this week. Unfortunately, it was nowhere to be found last night. To solve this problem, I would like to get a new book for you by Express Mail Service. And if you need it right now, how about your(用you)buying a new one in your local bookstore and I will pay for it. For this irrecoverable lose, I am to blame. If there are any other solutions you like, please let me know. Sorry again for my careless. Looking forward to your reply.(右下)Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评:7分模板内容用的比较多。另外道歉信的主旨是道歉,所以道歉部分应该是主要内容。
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