考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(327)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I'm so sorry for fogetting to give it back to you, the new book The Wind I borrowed from you last week. I came back home from New York yesterday and found it in my luggage.
I'm afraid you couldn't see it now.The book you lent to me is published in your country,so I'm sure you can take it in your local bookstores.Could you mind buying another one by yourself and I'll pay for it? If you couldn't find it,I'll mail this one to you by EMS. Or you have any other ways to solve the problem,then let me know.
I'm much sorry for any inconveniences my careless may cause and please accept my sincere apologies.I'm looking forward your reply.
Yours Truely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I'm so sorry for fogetting（拼写错误） to give it back to you, the new book The Wind I borrowed from you last week. I came back home from New York yesterday and found it in my luggage. I'm afraid you couldn't see it now. The book you lent to me is published in your country, so I'm sure you can take it in your local bookstores. Could you mind buying another one by yourself and I'll pay for it? If you couldn't find it, I'll mail this one to you by EMS. Or（加if） you have any other ways to solve the problem, then let me know. I'm much sorry for any inconveniences my careless may cause and please accept my sincere apologies. I'm looking forward your reply.Yours Truly（拼写错误）,Li Ming点评：6分建议第一段说明去信的目的，即这是一封道歉信，然后第二段写道歉的内容和补过措施等。
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