考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(336)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize that I couldn't attend to your birthday's party.I am grateful for your warm invitation and I give my best wishes to you.
Firstly,I hope that you will have a wonderful birthday with so many friends.In addition,a secret gift will be send to you by express mail and I believe that you will like it.Lastly,I assure that I must attend to your birthday's party next time.
Give my best wishes to you and your family.I hope that you will accept my sincerely apology. Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to apologize that I couldn't attend to your birthday's（直接用birthday就可以）party. I am grateful for your warm invitation and I give my best wishes to you.
Firstly, I hope that you will have a wonderful birthday with so many friends. In addition, a secret gift will be send to you by express mail and I believe that you will like it. Lastly, I assure that I must attend to your birthday's party next time.
Give my best wishes to you and your family. I hope that you will accept my sincerely apology.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
点评：8分
写的很不错。但是这个话题也已经被很多人写过了。
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