考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(343)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob:
I have just come back home from the airport..And I just can’t wait sitting here and writing this few lines to make an apology to you for I forget to return a music CD borrowed from you last week.How careless I am!
During my stay in Canada you’ve told me that the CD is full of private value and I know how much you cherish the CD.It is the gift your sister send to you at your 18th birthday.How about me deliver it to you by EMS?You’ll be able to listen to it no more than 3 days.
If you like the solution ,please let me know.Also,Please accept my sincere apologize for any inconvenious my careless have caused.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob:（英语中用逗号） I have just come back home from the airport..And I just can’t wait sitting here and writing（wait没有wait doing的用法）this few（these a few） lines to make an apology to you for I forget to return a music CD borrowed from you last week. How careless I am!During my stay inCanadayou’ve told me that the CD is full of private value and I know how much you cherish the CD. It is the gift（from） your sister send to you at（改成for） your 18th birthday. How about me（用I） deliver it to you by EMS? You’ll be able to listen to it no more than 3 days. If you like the solution , please let me know. Also, Please（p小写） accept my sincere apologize for any inconvenious（拼写错误） my careless have caused. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming
点评：只是改动了模板的一少部分内容，错误也比较多。
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