考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(363)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear bob,
I am writing the letter in purpose of making an apology to you for finding your music CD in my luggage. The CD, I guess, cannot be return to you at once ,as I have backed to my hometown (Canada).
I have to explain the reason is my carelessness in checking the luggage. To solve the problem, for one thing , you could download your favorite music on the internet with due consideration of the convenience of internet ,I have arranged to pay for the service. For another, I would deliver the music CD by EMS to your house as soon as possible, if you are in need of it urgently.
I look forward to hearing from you soon, and express my sincere apology again.
Yours, sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear bob（Bob）,
I am writing the letter in purpose of making an apology to you for finding your music CD in my luggage. The CD, I guess, cannot be return to you at once ,as I have backed to my hometown (Canada).
I have to explain the reason is my carelessness in checking the luggage. To solve the problem, for one thing , you could download your favorite music on the internet with due consideration of the convenience of internet ,（加连词）I have arranged to pay for the service. For another, I would deliver the music CD by EMS to your house as soon as possible, if you are in need of it urgently.
I look forward to hearing from you soon, and express my sincere apology again.
Yours,（逗号位于sincerely之后） sincerely
Li Ming
点评：基本上是仿写的模板内容。这样的话恐怕考试会吃亏。
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