考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(366)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Jack,
I am writing this letter to express my apology to you because I took your portable computer instead of mine by mistake in last week seminar.I did not find it until my return from Beijing.
To make up for my carelessness,I would like to propose two ways to solve this problem.I intend to delivery your computer by EMS as soon as possible and I will pay for the fares.Or I could ask my friend having a business conference in Beijing two days later to carry it for you.
I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience that I have caused and wish to hear from you quickly.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Jack（题目中给的是Bob）,
I am writing this letter to express my apology to you because I took your portable computer instead of mine by mistake in last week seminar. I did not find it until my return（应该用returning，因为你前面用的是my） from Beijing.
To make up for my carelessness, I would like to propose two ways to solve this problem. I intend to delivery your computer by EMS as soon as possible and I will pay for the fares. Or I could ask my friend having a business conference in Beijing two days later to carry it for you.
I am deeply sorry for any inconvenience that I have caused and wish to hear from you quickly.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
点评：7分
注意题目要求，题目中已经给出是Bob，就不要用别的名字了。
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