考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(307)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I would like to make a apology to you for being unable to attend to the activity you organize about Chinese context this Friday afternoon, for I am planning to prepare for my English examination on Saturday this week.
Since I took part in the Chinese context last year, some amazings, surprises and movings could be easily felt. Though I can not come to this meaningful competition this term, I would like to give you my best wishes for the success of it.
Please accept my sincere sorry again. Meanwhile, I am looking forward you to telling me the result of the activity.
yours truly,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob, I would like to make a（an） apology to you for being unable to attend to the activity you organize about Chinese context this Friday afternoon, for I am planning to prepare for my English examination on Saturday this week. Since I took part in the Chinese context last year, some amazings（这是个形容词，没有复数）, surprises and movings（这是个形容词，没有复数） could be easily felt. Though I can not come to this meaningful competition this term, I would like to give you my best wishes for the success of it. Please accept my sincere sorry again. Meanwhile, I am looking forward you to telling me the result of the activity. yours（Yours） truly, Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，要注意细节处，分清单词的词性。
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