考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(244)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear sir or madam,
I would like to obtain about some information about a book of your outlet.The book's name is "sorry,I love you".therefor,I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
First of all,what is the edition of the book,what is its theme.secondly,please let me know if I could pay for it by money or do you accept credit card.
I must point out that I hope to frequently buy your books.So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on the prices of your books.I look forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir or madam（Sir or Madam）,I would like to obtain about some information about a book of your outlet. The book's name is "sorry,I love you"（英语中书的名称不用引号，首字母大写）. therefor（拼写错误）, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.First of all, what is the edition of the book,（加连词and） what is its theme.（这是问句）secondly（拼写错误）, please let me know if I could pay for it by money or do you accept credit card.I must point out that I hope to frequently buy your books. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on the prices of your books. I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分写的还可以，都是比较简单的错误，应该避免。
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