考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(231)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am getting ready for the National Entrance Text of English for Ma or Ms. One of my friend who studied your lessons last year tells me about your school.I decide to study your curriculum.
The purpose of this letter is to ask some questions on your curriculum:First,I hope you can help me seek out several courses fit me .Second,theprice of these courses.Third,whether the teacher is the best or not.
Thank you for your reading.I wonder if it is convenient for you to call the following number:7654321.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincersly yours,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am getting ready for the National Entrance Text of English for Ma or Ms. One of my friend who studied your lessons last year tells me about your school. I decide to study your curriculum.The purpose of this letter is to ask some questions on your curriculum:（改成句号）First, I hope you can help me seek out several courses fit me .Second, theprice of these courses.（这不是一句完整的话，最起码没有谓语） Third, whether the teacher is the best or not.（虽然这句话没问题，但是这个问题不太好，建议换一个问题问） Thank you for your reading. I wonder if it is convenient for you to call the following number:7654321. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincersly（拼写错误） yours, LiMing点评：5-6分要注意你的用语，简短的小作文中避免出现语法错误。
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