考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(232)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear teacher,
I am a student in university who has a shortcoming in English. So I has a burning desire for studying English well. From the dairly newspeper,I recognised the course about English study institued by your school. I want to involved in it to improve the ability of English.
There are some questions I want to realise. First,what time does the course started on? As a student in school,I have no much time in my dairly life. Hence, I must clearly know wether I have time to involved it. Second, how much do I should pay ? It is necessary for me to consider it.If the course spend too much,I think I have on ability to pay for it 。
Thank you for your time to read my questions.I really wish to recive your reply .
Sincerely yours
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear teacher, I am a student in university who has a shortcoming in English. So I has（主语是I，用have） a burning desire for studying English well. From the dairly newspeper（拼写错误）, I recognised（拼写错误） the course about English study institued（拼写错误） by your school. I want to involved（动词不定式后用动词原形） in it to improve the ability of English. There are some questions I want to realise（拼写错误）. First, what time does the course started on? As a student in school, I have no much time in my dairly（拼写错误） life. Hence, I must clearly know wether（拼写错误） I have time to involved（动词不定式后用动词原形） it. Second, how much do I should pay（should I pay） ? It is necessary for me to consider it. If the course spend too much, I think I have on ability to pay for it 。 Thank you for your time to read my questions. I really wish to recive（拼写错误） your reply . Sincerely yours（加逗号）点评：4-5分字数超出太多，会被扣分。错误比较多，尤其是拼写错误。
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