考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(283)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Bob,
I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology. I am very glad that you invited me to your brithday party. But, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have to fly to Beijing on business.
To make up, Mary will help me to give the gift, something you eagered for weeks, to you. If birthday present is not enough, I also intend to buy you some native goods of China during my journary on business.Will you forgive me on presents account? If yes, can you share me the photoes of your party through the Internet?
Again, please accept my apologise.I am looking forward to your response.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Bob,I am writing this letter to express my sincere apology. I am very glad that you invited me to your brithday（拼写错误） party. But, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because I have to fly to Beijing on business.To make up, Mary will help me to give the gift, something you eagered（拼写错误） for weeks, to you. If birthday present is not enough, I also intend to buy you some native goods of China during my journary（拼写错误） on business. Will you forgive me on presents account? If yes, can you share me the photoes（拼写错误） of your party through the Internet?Again, please accept my apologise（拼写错误）. I am looking forward to your response.Yours truly,
Li Ming点评：5分道歉信的重点在道歉，第一段说明这是一封道歉信，第二段写你要道歉的内容，加之补过的方法。你的第三段落款有点过于简洁。建议同学看以范文。
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