考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(219)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a graduate who is planning to take the National Entrance Test of Architecture for MS Candidates,so I would like to inquire some informations on this test.
Firstly,please give me particular accounts as regards how many subjects the test contains and what they are.I wonder that when and where the exam takes place.Secondly,I also need to know the terms of enrolling and recruiting.Firdly,I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to recommend me some references.
Thank you for your time and consideration of my requests.I will look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a graduate who is planning to take the National Entrance Test of Architecture for MS Candidates, so I would like to inquire some informations（拼写错误） on this test.Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards how many subjects the test contains and what they are. I wonder that when and where the exam takes place. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of enrolling and recruiting. Firdly（Thirdly？）, I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to recommend me some references.Thank you for your time and consideration of my requests. I will look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely（加逗号） Li Ming点评：7-8分正常情况下是一篇很好的作文，但是用的模板内容有点多。
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