考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(278)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
Recently,our company will organizing a group of staff members to see a film in your cinema.I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.
First of all,what's the price of the group tickets?And I wonder if there is any discounts.Moreover,what's the deadline of this tickets,and what are the cinema's daily opening hours?And above all,is there any notice to film audiences?In order to maintain the good environment,all of us would like to cooperate with you.
I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, Recently, our company will organizing（will后加动词原形） a group of staff members to see a film inyour cinema. I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information. First of all, what's the price of the group tickets? And I wonder if there is any discounts（单复数保持一致）. Moreover, what's the deadline of this tickets（单复数保持一致）, and what are the cinema's daily opening hours? And above all, is there any notice to film audiences（这里表达的不太好，让人不太明白你想说什么）? In order to maintain the good environment, all of us would like to cooperate with you. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：7分整体写的不错，但是几个错误比较拉分，都是比较明显的错误，希望下次避免。
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