考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(151)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
As I am planning to look for a job which suits for me, I have send a great deal of resume and also attended times of auditions since the last year of my time in college. It is by chance that I heard the news your department need a teacher from your website, I am much fond of it at the same time.
Like everybody elses, I got the Bachelor's Degree logiclly throught learning my English major for four years. During these years nor only the study of major but also extracurricular activites have richened my life. I have got high resourses in TEM-8, CET-6 and BEC as well. For parttime job I worked for a teacher assistante for one year which is valuable experience for me.
I would express my gratitude for your spending time on my application and I am cofident for being a good teacher working for you.
Your sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
As I am planning to look for a job which suits for me, I have send（用过去分词）a great deal of resume and also attended times of auditions since the last year of my time in college. It is by chance that I heard the news your department need a teacher from your website,（加连词） I am much fond of it at the same time. Like everybody（这个词太绝对，not “everybody” got a BD）elses（拼写错误）, I got the Bachelor's Degree logiclly throught（拼写错误）learning my English major for four years. During these years nor（not）only the study of major but also extracurricular activites（拼写错误）have richened my life. I have got high resourses（拼写错误） in TEM-8, CET-6 and BEC as well. For parttime（拼写错误）job I worked for a teacher assistante（拼写错误）for one year which is （加不定冠词a）valuable experience for me. I would express my gratitude for your spending time on my application and I am cofident（拼写错误） for being a good teacher working for you.Your（Yours）sincerely,Li Ming点评：5-6分字数太多。拼写错误比较多。
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