考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(196)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam:
As I am planning to take the CET-6 this year.I have decided to order some books with consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
First of all,please give me particular accounts as regards names ,authors,the public houses and the prices of these books.What’s more,I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service.Lastely,I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver theses books by EMS to Nanjing Normal University by september 1st,2011.
I would like to extent my greatest appreciation for your kind considerration of my request.Looking forward to your reply.
Truly yours,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:（英语中用逗号）As I am planning to take the CET-6 this year.（这不是一句完整的话，把句号改成逗号） I have decided to order some books with consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.First of all, please give me particular accounts as regards names , authors, the public houses and the prices of these books. What’s more, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Lastely（拼写错误）, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver theses（拼写错误） books by EMS to Nanjing Normal University by september（月份首字母大写）1st,2011. I would like to extent my greatest appreciation for your kind considerration（拼写错误） of my request. Looking forward to your reply.Truly yours,Li Ming点评：给人感觉几乎是把模板的内容照抄下来，要适当的加入自己的表达，换一换要询问的话题。
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