考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(197)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Mandam,
I am a student who is planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MS candidates. I,therefore,decide to place an order of some reference books with due consideration of your bookstore and the high quality of your books.
Firstly, I wonder if you could provide me with these books, such as Biochemistry and Ecology. Secondly,I also need to know the prices of these books and whether you could send these books by Express mail.
Thank you for your time and consideration of my requests. Looking forward to hearing from you sonn.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Mandam（Madam）, I am a student who is planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MS candidates. I, therefore, decide to place an order of some reference books with due consideration of your bookstore and the high quality of your books. Firstly, I wonder if you could provide me with these books, such as Biochemistry and Ecology. Secondly, I also need to know the prices of these books and whether you could send these books by Express mail. Thank you for your time and consideration of my requests. Looking forward to hearing from you sonn（soon）. Yours sincerely, Li Ming点评：6分第二部分最好写三条，两条的话给人感觉内容有点不够。第一段可以再简短一点。
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