考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(182)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam ,
Immediately I saw your advertiment in the Evening News for a network engineer ，I felt it was just the kind of post for whichI have the qualification and for whichI have been looking for some time . Enclosed is a copy of my resume.
I graduated with a bachelor' degree in 2008 from hunan university . On the one hand ,I major in network engineering and do some relevant part-time job during study years, soI assume my qualifications are ideal match of your requirement. On the other hand ,I have heard so much about your company ,andI believe it could offers a balance platform for a person who have great passion to show his outstanding abilities.
If you have any position aviliable ,please grant me a job interview at your convenience.Thank you for your time and consideration.
YoursSincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam , Immediately I saw your advertiment（拼写错误） in the Evening News for a network engineer ，I felt it was just the kind of post for whichI have the qualification and for whichI have been looking for some time . Enclosed is a copy of my resume.I graduated with a bachelor' degree in 2008 from hunanuniversity（Hunan University） . On the one hand , I major（用过去时，因为你已经毕业了） in network engineering and do（用过去时） some relevant part-time job during study years, soI assume my qualifications are ideal match of your requirement. On the other hand , I have heard so much about your company ,andI believe it could offers a balance platform for a person who have great passion to show his outstanding abilities（要谦虚）.If you have any position aviliable（拼写错误） ,please grant me a job interview at your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.YoursSincerely,Li Ming点评：6分语言要简洁，言简意赅即可。个人认为第二段最好写三条内容，这就需要你简化前两条的内容，尤其是第二条。
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