考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(133)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Mr Wang,
I am a student who studies literature of nowadays in class three grade one in our school and I know you and your lessons about the develop of the modern literature from my classmates,so it is very grad to me that you can give me a guide.
Firstly,I do not know what books should be reading at the beginning,if you can take a list of those books to me,it will be very happy for me.Secondly,I want to study Wang Xiaobo who I do like best,and if you have some books about him,please lend to me when you do not read them.Lastly,I am writing an article,and,it is my pleasure that in your spare time you take a help to me.
Thanks for your time and convenience to read this letter.It is very important and gladful for me to hear from your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Mr（Mr.） Wang,
I am a student who studies literature of nowadays（现代文学？） in class three grade one in our school and I know you and your lessons about the develop（这里应该用名词development）of the modern literature from my classmates, so it is very grad to me that you can give me a guide.
Firstly, I do not know what books should be reading（应该用过去分词形式，被动语态）at the beginning, if you can take a list of those books to me, it will be very happy for me.（可以去掉） Secondly, I want to study Wang Xiaobo who I do like best, and if you have some books about him, please lend to me when you do not read them. Lastly, I am writing an article, and, it is my pleasure that in your spare time you take a help to me.
Thanks for your time and convenience to read this letter. It is very important and gladful（glad本身就是个形容词）for me to hear from your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming点评：5-6分字数超出的比较多，内容不够简洁，注意语言表达上要言简意赅。
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