考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(134)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
DearMichael,
Ihavegottoknowthatyouandyourclassaregoingtohaveaweekendexcursionthenextweek.Thepointisthatyouaretheoneorganizetheactivity,wouldyou
pleasecountmein?
I'mdyingfortheexcursionandcouldn'twaittojoinyou.Ifyouaresopleasedtoacceptmeasoneofyou,pleasetellmewhereyouaregoingto,whatshouldbetaken,
whenandwheretoassembleandothernecessaryinformationswhenyouareconvenient.
Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandtheopportunity.
Sincerelyyours,
LiMing Dear Michael,I have got to know that you and your class are going to have a weekend excursion the next week. The point is that（改成As） you are the one（加who） organize the activity, would you please count me in ?I'm dying for the excursion and couldn't wait to join you. If you are so pleased to accept me as one of you, please tell me where you are going to , what should be taken ,when and where to assemble and other necessary informations（information是个不可数名词） when you are convenient.Looking forward to your reply and the opportunity. Sincerely yours, LiMing（落款位于右下角）点评：6分这样写虽然也是询问的形式，但不是最好的询问信形式，建议找范文看一下。
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