考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(147)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Li Ming,a graduate student from Sichuan university who is major in law.I am writing
to ask you some questions about the job of assisstant lawer you offer.I am grateful if you are
so kind as to answer my questions.
To begin with,I am wondering if the job need any professional training in law?Moreover,
I want to know whether the candidate who has an outstanding skill at English listening
comprehension is prefered?Lastly,how long will I work per day if I can take that position?
I appreciate it a lot if you could give me a reply.
Yours truly,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Ming, a graduate student from Sichuan university（具体的某一所大学，首字母大写） who is major in law. I am writing to ask you some questions about the job of assisstant lawer（两个单词拼写错误） you offer. I am grateful if you are so kind as to answer my questions. To begin with, I am wondering if the job need（应该用第三人称单数） any professional training in law?（应该用句号，这是一个陈述句） Moreover, I want to know whether the candidate who has an outstanding skill at English listening comprehension is prefered（双写r加ed）? （应该用句号，这是一个陈述句） Lastly, how long will I work per day if I can take that position?I appreciate it a lot if you could give me a reply.Yours truly,Li Ming（落款位于右下角）点评：6分细节性错误有点多，注意拼写。分清什么时候用问号什么时候用句号。
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