考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(90)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a postgraduate from the department of nursing of Harbin Medical University. I am writting the letter for purpose of applying for a position in your hospital.
The primary factors for my application are as follows. For one thing, it has been seven years of educating for me to learn how to be a good nurs with professinal ethics and practical skills, and I can do everything perfect. For another, I would like to be a staff number of your hospital with a great enthusiasm and desire, because I know that the nursing work in this hospital is developing very well, I could enjoy my post in helping the various of patients.
Wish you further success in your continuing work. Your prompt attention to my application would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a postgraduate from the department of nursing of Harbin Medical University. I am writting（拼写错误） the letter for purpose of applying for a position in your hospital.
The primary factors for my application are as follows. For one thing, it has been seven years of educating for me to learn how to be a good nurs（拼写错误） with professinal（拼写错误） ethics and practical skills, and I can do everything perfect（要谦虚）. For another, I would like to be a staff number of your hospital with a great enthusiasm and desire, because I know that the nursing work in this hospital is developing very well, I could enjoy my post in helping the various of patients.
Wish you further success in your continuing work. Your prompt attention to my application would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely, LiMing点评：6分第二段应该写一写关于经验的内容，因为你的专业即使没有工作经验也有实习经验。然后第三条在写对这所医院的向往，但是要简洁。
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