考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(160)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like organizing a groupof student learn about history to pay a visit in your old town. Therefore, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with i nformation concerning visited details.
First of all, what arethe dailyopening hours and if the old town opened around?
Secondly, if there is have shows for spread characteristic of the old town.
The last but least, do we have a guide? We want to konw more about the old town for our study. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerelly，
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, 【I would like organizing（would like to do） a groupof student（加不定式to） learn about history to pay a visit in your old town.】（整理一下这句话，太对的不定式） Therefore, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning visited details. Firstof all, what arethe dailyopening hours and if the old town opened around（这句话在这里要表达什么意思？古城是否营业？）? Secondly, if there is have（去掉，there be句型，is作主语） shows for spread characteristic of the old town. The last but（加not） least, do we have a guide? We want to konw（拼写错误） more about the old town for our study. I am looking forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.Your sincerelly（拼写错误）， LiMing点评：5-6分格式比较乱，下次上传作文前先在文本文档中过滤一下。要提高你的写作能力。
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