考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(118)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir：
I learned from your company's web and knew that there is a vacancy for Executive Assistant, a position which I am very interested in.
I am a senior student from Sichuan University, majoring in Computer Technology. Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I develop special capabilities in using computer to run the firm and assistant the manager's work. Moreover, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field due to my internship at Baidu. It seems to me that all these have prepared me ideally for the role of Executive Assistant in such wonderful company as yours.
For further information please refer to my attached resume. I should be please to attend for an interview at your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir（因为不知道是男士还是女士，所以要用Sir or Madam）：（英语中用逗号）I learned from your company's web and knew that there is（时态服从主句，用过去时） a vacancy for Executive Assistant, a position which I am very interested in.I am a senior student from Sichuan University, majoring in Computer Technology. Under the influence of the courses I have taken, I develop special capabilities in using computer to run the firm and assistant the manager's work. Moreover, I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this field due to my internship at Baidu. It seems to me that all these have prepared me ideally for the role of Executive Assistant in such （加不定冠词a）wonderful company as yours. For further information please refer to my attached resume. I should be please to attend for an interview at your convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评：6-7分中间部分需要简化一点。注意格式，不要在格式上丢分。
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