考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(121)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear sir,
I have read your advertisement in newspaper for a edit, and i wish to apply for the position.
I will graduate from **Univercity major in broadcast and television edit.I have no normal working experience, but i had field trip in television set. I am fond of my major.I usually make small movie about student at school. Sometims, I also write passenges for local newspaper.
I believe i have the apporpriate qualifications for this post. If you need to know more about me please reply to me by this address. Thank you for you consideration of my application.
sincerely
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear sir（改成Sir or Madam）, I have read your advertisement in newspaper for aedit（an editor）, and i（大写） wish to apply for the position. I will graduate from **Univercity（拼写错误）major（majoring） in broadcast and television edit（edit是个动词，改成editing）. I have no normal working experience, but i（大写）had field trip in television set. I am fond of my major. I usually make small movie about student at school. Sometims（拼写错误）, I also write passenges（拼写错误） for local newspaper. I believe i（大写） have the apporpriate（拼写错误） qualifications for this post. If you need to know more about me please reply to me by this address. Thank you for you（应该是所有格形式your） consideration of my application. sincerely（Yours sincerely，） LiMing（落款部分位于右下角） 点评：4-5分考试是看你应用这种问题的能力，所以内容可以是虚构的，第二段要有条理说明你申请这项工作的有利条件。注意格式和拼写。
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