考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(123)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I really appreciate for your prompt attention to my application letter. I’m writing to apply for the position of electrical engineer in your company that you advertised in the newspaper. Enclosed with this letter is my resume which further details my qualification and previous work experience.
I supposed that I am competence for this job. And there are three reasons as follows. The first and foremost , I have an degree in electrical engineering and I am good at this area because this subject appeals to me. Secondly, I am glad to learn something new and I know that an excellent electrical engineer is really learned. The last but not least, I have worked as an electrical engineer in other company so I am aware of how could I be adequate to this job. For example, I know that the electric circuit is the most important course and I am skilled in it.
I am deeply grateful if you would grant me am interview. Look forward to your reply.
yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I really appreciate for your prompt attention to my application letter. I’m writing to apply for the position of electrical engineer in your company that you advertised in the newspaper. Enclosed with this letter is my resume which further details my qualification and previous work experience. I supposed that I am competence（这里应该用一个形容词） for this job. And there are three reasons as follows. The first and foremost , I have an degree in electrical engineering and I am good at this area because this subject appeals to me. Secondly, I am glad to learn something new and I know that an excellent electrical engineer is really learned. The last but not least, I have worked as an electrical engineer in other（another） company so I am aware of how could I be adequate to this job. For example, I know that the electric circuit is the most important course and I am skilled in it. I am deeply grateful if you would grant me am interview. Look（Looking） forward to your reply. yours（Yours） sincerely,Li Ming点评：6分字数太多。第一段和第二段都需要简化。
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