考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改(27)
考研英语复习资料：考研英语作文范文批改，新东方在线考研频道编辑整理，总有一篇适用你。考研英语待批改作文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I got the news that your company is searching a marketing managerof the comging productpromotion. Ihope to apply to this position.
I am confident about my experience and knowledge onthis field for my nearlyfive years of working period. I am certificated on Bachelor degree of manegement and admistration. I have been living in this city for 10 years so that I am familiar with the local condition and the favor of the citizens around. I believe that afterwe make the first step of investigation on the consumers preference, we could make a well project for advertisting andthereafter get asatisfied selling prospect.
Hope to hear fromyou soon.
Best Wishes
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir/Madam, I got the news that your company is searching a marketing managerof the comging（拼写错误） productpromotion. Ihope to apply to（一般用for，apply for） this position. I am confident about my experience and knowledge onthis field for my nearlyfive years of working period（这里表达的不太好，建议将你的工作经验拿出来单独写一句话）. I am certificated on Bachelor degree of manegement（拼写错误，management） and admistration（拼写错误，administration）. I have been living in this city for 10 years so that I am familiar with the local condition and the favor of the citizens around. I believe that afterwe make the first step of investigation on the consumers（consumers’） preference, we could make a well project for advertisting（拼写错误，advertising） andthereafter get asatisfied selling prospect. Hope to hear fromyou soon. Best Wishes LiMing（一般落款用Yours sincerely/truly，下一行LiMing的形式，位于右下角）点评：6-7分拼写错误有点多，另外格式上不要失分，否则太可惜。
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