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2016考研英语作文考前速提:第3段及结尾写作框架

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    2016考研英语作文考前速提:第3段及结尾写作框架
    解析:第三段与结尾部分是整篇文章的总结部分,对于整体来说有点睛和提分的作用。本文提供的框架也分为负向文章行文思路与正向文章行文思路两大类,第三段的总结与提升主要从两个层面(社会层面与个人层面)来分析。
    一、第三段开头可以用到的过渡句:
    What should we do to release/fix the problem?
    Are there any recommendations to solve the problem?
    How to cure the pressing situation?
    What should we do at present?
    +The answer is that all hands are required to (solve the pressing
problem/improve the situation.
      二、负向文章行文思路:
    1、社会层面
    (1)中央地方共同努力
    The local officials should resort to the law to regulate ( environmental
conservation ) . Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank
check to the local and should be partially involved in (curbing the local
tainted environment).
    state government
    (2)政府立法听民意
    Our government should resort to the law to regulate ( the standard of
product quality ) and shall listen to public opinions and demands when
formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to (quality of product)
    food security/safety
    (3)政府直面问题,听民意,平衡两者关系
    Our government should not sugarcoat(cover) the problem but listen to public
opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to
(09-网络远近the Internet) and
    try to juggle ( the use of network and the supervision on it/ control over
it )
    try to balance between (the use of network and the control over it)
    juggle A and B
    unfavorable information
    balance between A and B
    (4)学校提供相关教育
    Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to
learn how to juggle (03溺爱孩子their physical development and psychological
maturity/ 13选择 their study at school and internship outside the campus/off
campus) on campus
    (5)学校组织
    Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the
campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that ( 06追星--chasing idol
during the youth should be properly handled by their parents. )
    (6)媒体
    Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service
advertisements
    to call on parents to ( 03溺爱parent their children properly )
    to promote the awareness of (03溺爱 right parenting )
    2、个人层面
    (1)有问题找家长和辅导员
    Our young generation should turn to our student supervisors and parents for
recommendations about
    how to (balance between internship and academy for their future
career.)
    how to promote their awareness of ( )
    how to strengthen their belief that ( )
    (2)积极投入活动
    We should take part into the campaign to promote the awareness of ( ) and
fulfill our accountability as a member of our community.
    (3)啥都做
    No matter how much fund that our government would put into (the recovery of
tainted region), we will never see (a clean sky or breath fresh air) if effort
of the young generation were absent. Although not financially independent, our
college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take
part into the improvement of our community.
    3、负向文章行文思路结尾:
    With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would
get improved soon.
      三、正向文章行文思路 (积极倡导):
    ( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth
of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to ( foster people’s
confidence ).
    1、社会层面
    (1)媒体传递正能量media
    The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence,
to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and
adversities.
    (2)教育education
    Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral
education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they
enter their adulthood. Specifically,self-discipline and code of social conduct
should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.
    (3)学校college
    College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance
their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of
social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be
provided as elective curriculums to college students.
    curriculum 校内课程
    extra curriculum课外活动
    electives n选修课 elective curriculums
    2、个人层面
    (1)改善自我
    ①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of
reading books. You will find what you can not get in reality but in books, such
as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power
etc.
    such as +N/doing
    for example,+句子
    ②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would
improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will
find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group
exercising.
    find oneself +adj
    find oneself +doing sth
    ③+给予他们时间成长Of course, we can not grow to be (a confident person) overnight
if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn
it.
    (2)志愿工作voluntary work
    It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work.
During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness
boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands
with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.
    get sth done
    3、正向文章行文思路结尾:
    I am determined to say that effort and devotion from all hands would
promise a prosperous and harmonious society.
    I am sure that effort and devotion from all walks of life would ensure that
our society make a rapid strides in near future.?
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