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2015考研英语复习:考生应避免的病句(一)

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    1. I am not good at maths, but English
    改进: I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English.
    2. Who is the proper person to make up his minds about children’s leisure time?
    改进: Who is the proper person to plan children’s leisure time?
    3.It is children who clear about their interests.
    改进: It is children who are clear about their own interests.
    4. I agree the latter idea.
    改进: I agree with the latter idea.
    5. Many people dissatisfy with the status quo.
    改进: Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo.
    6. So I feel breathe more comfortably now.
    改进: So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe.
    7. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.
    改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.
    8. No one knows all the things.
    改进: No one knows everything.
    9. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.
    改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.
    10. Each form of shavings friends has its advantages.
    改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.
    11. I was admitted to a Key University for which few dared to sign up.
    改进: I was admitted to a Key University to which few dared to apply.
    12. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.
    改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.
    13. They will learn the bad habits.
    改进: They will develop bad habits.
    14. In this continued process, people make progress.
    改进: In this cycle, people make progress.
    15. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.
    改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.
    16. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.
    改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.
    17. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.
    改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.
    18. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.
    改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.
    19. Children should be taught disciplines in groups to avoid unnecessary lost.
    改进: Children should be taught discipline in groups to avoid unnecessary loss.
    20. I felt alone.
    21. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time when we finish eating without doing any washing.
    改进: The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal.
    22. Smoking can help you relax your mind.
    改进: Cigarettes can help you relax.
    23. What’s about nonsmokers?
    改进: What about nonsmokers?
    24. Why not to be a non-smoker?
    改进: Why not be a non-smoker?
    25. Everyone will have many friends in his life.
    改进: Everyone has friends in his life.
   
   
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