考研英语复习资料：考研英语大作文9句话模板
考研英语复习资料：考研英语(一)大作文9句话模板，新东方金凌虹终极点拨。 文章第一段：图画描述段 [ 写第一、二共2句话 ] 文章第一句：there be 描述小虹语录：这句话只要概括性的描述图画中的对象以及对象的动作状态或基本状态就可以了，我们可以采用初中就学过的there be 句型搞定，可以用简单句加简单词，但是一定不能写错
As is symbolically portrayed in the picture given above, there is/ are sb. doing sth. [+方式+地点+ 时间] . 历年真题举例：
2011 There are two people sitting on a boat and throwing rubbish into the lake. ( There are two tourists taking sightseeing on a small boat while dropping litter carelessly into a lake.)
2010 There is a boiling hot pot containing various elements (ingredients) of multi-culture.
2009 There are many people sitting in front of their computers and communicating with each other through the Internet.
2008 There are two disabled (crippled ) men running forward together.
2007 There are two people playing soccer on a court.
(There is a striker going to shoot at the goal defended by a goalkeeper on a football field.)
2005 There are four people standing in front of a goalmouth(goal) while an old man is sitting in the middle.
2004 There is a man running toward the finishing line of a race.
2003 There is a flower facing two completely different destinies in two different living circumstances.
2002 There is a young American girl wearing traditional Chinese dress and ornaments.
2001 There is a small oil lamp lighting up the dark room.
2000 There is a change between the number of fish boats and fishes.
文章第二句：细节描述
小虹语录：将图画中的人物的表情，道具，文字说明，左右图画分别描述进行细节性、补充性的描述;只写和主旨有关的内容-举例：“终点就是新起点”
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2011- The lake is already full of flowing rubbish such as plastic containers, fish-bones, banana skin, watermelon rind, bottles, tins, food wrappings, and so on.
2010-These pluralistic cultures can be categorized as cultural celebrities home and abroad as Bi Sheng, Lao She, Shakespeare, and Einstein, philosophical concepts as Buddhism, Taoism, Confucianism, benevolence, ritual, humanism, enlightenment, post-modernism, and deconstruction, as well as performing arts as Peking Opera, kung fu, and Swan Lake.
2009- Their workplaces are divided into separate parts which isolate people from each other.
2008-They bind their disabled legs together and hold each other’s shoulder tightly, with their sticks left behind.
文字说明：The caption below the drawing indicates that
2010- the cultural “hot pot” is both delicious and nutritious
2009-the near and far among the Internet.
2008-We can go anywhere with the combination of one of your legs and one of mine.
2005-a foot ball match of love
2004-the end is the beginning
2003-the flower in greenhouse can hardly withstand rain and storm
2001- and that the darker the room is, the brighter the lamp becomes . The caption below the drawing indicates that “love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places.”
两幅图画：
2007- on the left side, the goal-keeper imagine that he is so smaller than he actually is that guarding the goal becomes a mission impossible. On the right side, the striker is hesitant to shoot due to his illusion of the “giant ” goal-keeper.
2006-The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon phenomenon that people in increasing numbers are showing their admiration to their role model in an excessive way.(总句抽象)On the left side, the young man writes the word “BECKHAM” on his face. On the right side, the other young man spend RMB300 on his hair in a Beckham-style.
2003-on the left side, the flower is placed in a green house which shelters it from the severe wind and storm. On the right side, when removed from the green house and exposed to the wind and storm, the flower immediately fades and withers
2000- On the left side, there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing boat in 1990. By contrast, on the right side, in 1995 there was only one fish, but many fishing boats.
动作表情：
2006-the elderly son kicks out the father, and the second son is preparing for warding him off. The other two children are also reluctant to let their father roll into their goalmouth.
2004-Although sweating profusely and seems quite tired, he continues to run rather than stops on the finishing line.
2002- She looks very beautiful with a nice smile on her face. It seems that the girl is very fond of the Chinese costume.
文章第四句：论述方式
小虹语录：论述方式也即文章的展开方式，共四种：1解释原因、2利好重要、3弊端危害、4举例论证;写第二段的时候，你可以将这几种论证方式结合起来写，也可以一种写到尾，关键在于，那种论述方式，你的论证素材比较多，比较好些!
第一种论述方式-解释原因：
小虹语录：这种方式一般是写社会现实性比较强的话题，类似环保，产品质量，诚信，假货，物价高等;注意万能理由和论据的积累
Many factors can account for this phenomenon， and the followings might be the critical ones：
或What exactly contributes to this phenomenon?it is a thought-provoking question and answers could be listed as follows：
(2011年;2010年;2006年;2005年;2003年;2002年;2000年)
第二种论述方式-利好重要：
小虹语录：这种论述方式，一般写积极价值观作文，比如自信、合作、爱心的重要性等等，关键要写作对哪些方面哪些人有哪些好处，需要背诵12条万能理由
We can’t emphasize too much the benefit/importance of sth. (confidence， cooperation，trust).
(2010年;2009年;2008年;2007年;2005年，2004年;2002年;2001年)
第三种论述方式-弊端危害：
小虹语录：这种论述方式，一般写价值观作文，但是一般都是缺乏自信、缺乏合作、缺乏爱心带来的危害，关键要写作对哪些方面哪些人有哪些坏处，需要背诵12条万能理由]
The sth. (loss of trust / absence of confidence ) will be bound to exert a detrimental impact on our life/ lives/growth/the development of economy.
(2011年;2009年;2007年;2006年;2005年;2003年;2000年)
第四种论述方式-举例论证：
小虹语录：这种论述方式，关键要看题目中有没有具体要求 give specific example，如果有要求，那就必须要用举例论证了，举例可以举身边的例子，自己的例子，也可以是社会现象，社会事件的例子
Quite a few examples can be given to prove the harm (demerits缺点) of sth. I can think of no better illustration than the following one:
举例：
Without confidence， how can Yao Ming，an once ordinary and unknown basketball player, achieve unprecedented success in NBA ? 2007年自信
The successful hosting of the 29th Beijing 2008 Olympic Games should be attributed to cooperation among people from all walks of life. 2008年合作
(2007年;2004年;2001年)
文章第五句：论据一 (1.原因之一; 2.好处之一; 3.坏处之一;4.例子之一)
文章第六句：论据二(1.原因之二; 2.好处之二; 3.坏处之二;4.例子之二)
小虹语录：文章第五、六句是证明第四句话论证方式的例子，可以是写原因、好处、坏处和例子。考前都有类似于“12条万能利弊理由”和“话题论据积累”背诵，一定要背诵下来，以免考试的时候无话可说!
文章第三段：评论comments [ 写第七、八、九共3句话 ]
小虹语录：文章的最后一段时评论段，评论段有两种写法：
一、观点阐述段：也许图画的话题是一个正面积极地观点(如自信、合作等)，那就不需要提出建议措施，只要写出你对这个观点的看法就可以了，一般采用利弊陈述的方式
二、建议措施段：提出某种社会现象(一般是负面的社会现象)的解决措施;
文章第三段的第一种写法：观点阐述型
文章第二段：寓意+论述 [ 写第三、四、五、六共4句话 ]
小虹语录：这段写4句话：第三句话，写图画寓意‘第四句话决定论述方式;第五、六句分别是具体的论据，需要考前大量背诵
文章第三句：寓意说明段
小虹语录：注意从表层含义到深层含义的提炼!图画所画的寓意一般都是表面的，浅显的，但是第二段提炼的寓意，应该是深刻的，概括的，切忌就画说话，应该以画见大
The cartoon aims at informing us of the phenomenon of / the situation of/ the problem of / the significance of / the merits(优点)of/ the demerits(缺点) of.
历年真题寓意提炼举例：
2011-informing us of the fact that the environment of scenic spots and many other places is being damaged now.
2010-informing us the situation of cultural integration.
2009-informing us of the merits and demerits of Internet.
2008-informing us of the importance of cooperation
2007-informing us of the fact that under no circumstances should we underestimate ourselves while overestimate the hardships. (the importance of confidence)
2006- informing us of the phenomenon of blind idol worship.
2005-informing us of the importance of love and responsibility.
2004-informing us of the significance of persistence.
2003-informing us of the fact that parents’ overprotecting will do harm to children.
2002-informing us of the phenomenon of cultural integration
2001-informing us of the fact that love seems to be greater when the need is greater.
2000-informing us of the fact that our natural resources have been seriously damaged.
文章第七句：提出个人观点
From my perspective， the importance / benefit / harm / hazard of sth. is self-evident.
文章第八句：利弊陈述
For one thing，…(利处/弊端之一).For another,…(利处/弊端之二)
文章第九句：美好愿景
It is deeply-rooted in my mind that we can … as long as…
举例：It is deeply rooted in my mind that we can achieve our long-cherished goal as long as we are diligent enough.
文章第三段的第二种写法：建议措施型
文章第七句：号召句——呼吁大家采取措施行动来面对解决问题
In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be adopted before things get worse.
文章第八句：解决措施和建议(参考万能措施)
For one thing, 措施建议一; for another， 措施建议二
文章第九句：美好愿景(参考美好愿景总结)
Only in this way can we…
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