考研英语考前30天狂背作文(21)
6Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
该文分三段。第一段描述图画并定性说这种做法是极端危险的。第二段从两个方面进行剖析。最后一段表明自己的观点，并提出解决办法。In the picture presented to us, a person is investing all the money in the stock market-he even sells his car and raises a mortgage on his apartment. To me, a bystander, this is an extremely dangerous action.
Why has he become so crazy? He must be dreaming of making big money one day, but does he know that it has become exceedingly difficult for individual investors to survive in todays stock market? On the one hand, the market is full of institutional investors who are equipped with not only advanced techniques but also latest information. On the other hand, anyone is told that only a small part of people will make money in the market when he enters the market, but when his mind is full of greedy ideas, how can he carry out careful analysis and comprehensive reasoning so as to make sound judgment?
Personally I do not agree with the above choice at all. My suggestion is that anyone who wants to make money should receive professional training and then practice in the virtual market for at least a year. If a person can not do that, he had better leave this place full of danger and risks, for it will often be too late when he realizes that the cost is unbearable.
第一段对图画进行了描述。而后立即对这种做法进行定性，显得相当果断。如果不加这句话，第一段则只有一句，显得有点短了。
第二段首先使用一短一长两个反问句的经典用法，非常有力--他为什么变得如此疯狂？他一定想赚大钱，但是他知道在今天的股市中个人投资者的生存已变得极端困难了吗？而后分两方面谈：先说市场中充斥着兼具技术和信息的机构投资者；而后说每个人进场前都听说只有少数人赚钱，但是当脑中充满贪欲之时，哪里还能用细致分析和充分推理来帮助做出正确的判断呢？
第三段的首句斩钉截铁地表示自己不同意上述的选择。而后提出建议：任何人进入市场前必须经过专业培训，并且在虚拟股市中锤炼至少一年。如果做不到，就应该远离这充满危险的地方。要想在大作文上得到高分，是很不容易的事情。"文似看山不喜平"，在结构和内容达到要求之后，语言上可以作一点变化。该文的第二段共使用了三处反问句，这是一种相当新颖的手法。一般来说，连用两个反问句已经是一种高级写法，主要有两个平行反问句（如均是条件状语从句加反问句）和一短一长两种情形。这里用了三个反问句，与看到图中人物极度不理智的做法后的一吐为快的心情是相吻合的。
7Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the drawing,
2. interpret its meaning, and
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
该文可分三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段分析该图画所代表的现象。第三段谈解决问题的办法。I am sure that any one of you will be as shocked as me while looking at the two pictures: a person at the crossroads wants to know the right road to Li village, but only after he puts a coin into the slot does the signpost begin to point directions. What a genius design-we can expect that after some time a large sum of money will be collected with little effort.
The above pictures remind us of a common phenomenon in the present society. Some government departments try in a hundred and one ways to collect money by inventing different names. Obviously, they put economic interests in the first place and forget the promise to work for the public benefits.
To prevent such unpleasantness from happening again, laws should be established to standardize the various expenses of the government in the first place. When their rights and obligations become transparent, common people will realize whether an expense is reasonable or not. Moreover, a supervisory mechanism should be set up as soon as possible-only under the joint efforts of the mass media and all citizens, can we have a society of fairness and justice.
第一段描述图画，将两图的对比突显了出来。
第二段首句是段落统领句。第二句说有些政府部门千方百计巧立名目来捞钱。第三句说他们将经济利益放在首位，忘了为公众服务的承诺。
第三段首先讲应立法来规范政府收费。次句说当权利和义务变得透明时，普通人会知道某项收费是否合理。第三句说应尽快建立监督机制--只有媒体与公众同心协心，我们才能拥有平等与公正的社会。双图的情形总体上比单图少，描述时应注意突显对比或时间的接续。将图中事件与某种社会现象建立联系，是非常关键的步骤。这种联系有时不是唯一的，如2003年真题中的花朵就既可以指对孩子的教育，也可以指全球经济一体化下的某些国内企业，而这两种写法都可以得到很高的分数。大家不妨将读图的实践做一记录，看看哪些理解对了，哪些理解有偏差，经过这样的训练，准确率将大大提高。
8Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1. describe the picture;
2. interpret the meaning of the picture;
3. make your comment.
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
这幅图画主题鲜明，不难确定文章的主题是"乱穿马路"。在思考之后，我们决定分为四段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段说明该现象带来的后果。第三段说明解决该问题的办法。最后一段是结论。The present picture highlights several people who are crossing the street while the red light is on. It is quite obvious that the drawer wants all of us to think about the serious problem of jaywalking in our society.
The jaywalking phenomenon will bring many unfavorable consequences. First and foremost, it will increase the incidence of traffic accidents and thus cause the loss of lives and property. Moreover, common people are likely to copy the action of just a few people who defy the traffic rules. Finally, if this matter is not properly settled, it will pose a threat to the city traffic as a whole.
It is high time that we called on the efforts from all sides to deal with this problem properly. For one thing, the government should improve the design of traffic lights so as to make the operation more reasonable. For another, every citizen should behave himself first and help advise others not to jaywalk. Finally, the mass media should also play a positive role in helping people realize the importance of abiding by traffic rules.
No matter whether this problem is a natural result of social development, it is important that we find a satisfactory solution to it in this social transformation era.
第一段有两句话，第一句是对图画的描述，第二句说明了"乱穿马路"的主题，对下文的展开起到了承上启下的作用。
第二段讲的是该现象导致的不良后果，共有三点。一是会增加交通事故的发生率，从而导致生命与财产的损失。句中incidence指的是"发生率、发病率"。二是大部分人可能会在一小部分人的影响下不遵守交通规则，句中defy表示"不服从、公然反抗"。三是会给城市交通整体上带来威胁。
第三段写解决问题的办法，共有四句话。第一句是常用的套句，而后分三个方面说。首先是政府应改良信号灯的设计。其次是每个公民应当从自己做起，然后再劝说他人。最后，媒体应该帮助人们意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。
最后一段是结语，说不论这个问题是否是社会发展的自然结果，我们都应当在这个社会转型阶段给这个问题找到令人满意的解决方法。我们在看到图画和提纲后，应立即决定这篇文章该分几个段落来写。主题确定后，我们发现这是个令人担忧的社会问题，所以可以采用将二、三段写成原因和解决办法的常见写法。
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