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2015考研英语一大作文：图画作文手机
【评析】
这篇图画作文是继2013年12月四级之后再一次考察了一个社会热点问题：手机依赖症。越来越多的年轻人，无论是家人之间还是朋友之间，甚至是陌生人之间，过多地依赖手机，要么看信息，要么刷新闻，要么吃饭前先拍照，总之，过度依赖手机却忘记了彼此之间最珍贵的东西，那就是人与人之间的交流（interpersonal communication）。既然是忽略人与人之间的交流，所以定位为负面话题比较容易写作。
无论是手机依赖症还是人与人之间的交流，甚至与考场上这幅类似的漫画，都是我从强化班到冲刺班、预测班强调的。甚至是在预测班讲义上预测七的漫画几乎一样。这对于一部分考生而言是有写作优势的。
题干沿袭一贯要求，依旧是描述图画、阐释意义和给出评论。三段落写作分别如下：
第一段，开篇先交代这样一个社会现象，高科技影响了我们的日常生活。然后描述图画，围绕餐桌前是四个年轻人，各自拿着手机对着食物拍照，但是却彼此不交流。
第二段，这是一个负面话题，可以举例论证，说明人与人之间的交流缺乏，也可以分析其背后的原因。甚至可以引入一个亮点单词，2013年底的新合成词汇phubbing ，手机依赖症。
第三段，综合评析这一不好的现象，甚至对手机这种"双刃剑"的高科技进行评析。最后谈一谈对人与人之间的交流的建议和和谐健康社会的憧憬。
【参考范文】
No one in China can have failed to notice a not uncommon social issue that new technology such as mobile phone has changed our daily life in more than one way. As is vividly shown in the cartoon, around the dinning table sit four youngsters, friends or relatives, shooting photos about the foods and staring at their own phone without communicating with each other. Simple as the picture seems to be, the symbolic meaning is as deep as ocean.
The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly demonstrated an issue in our daily life: the lack of interpersonal communication because of the excessive usage of mobile. I can think of no better examples other than "Phubbing" which is the combination of "phone" and "snubbing". In modern cities exist a group of young people, chatting with friends and relatives only by cellphone and snubbing strangers every day. According to one latest survey conducted by the United Nation, above 90.52% of modern citizens spend most of their daytime on phone, including reading eBooks, scanning e-news, and sending messages, which is so called "Phubbing". Were the situation to continue, we would have to confront with an indifferent society.
Considering every aspect of this phenomenon, we should bear in mind that mobile phone is nothing but a communication tool, which is just a waste of our precious time and money. Thus the public should take practical actions to put an end to this trend. Just a smile or a greeting of "hello" could shorten the distance between people. Only in this way can we make our society more harmonious, healthy and vigorous.
2015考研英语二大作文：图表作文居民消费
我国某市民春节假期花销比例（新年礼物40%，交通20%，聚会吃饭20%，其他20%）
【评析】
这篇饼状图避开了热点话题，考察主题中规中矩，关于我国某城市居民开销花费问题（生活类话题）。考察的形式是英语二从未考察过的饼状图（在1997年考研英语一饼状图出现过一次），如果事先准备不充分的考生，很可能会有点恐慌。不过，在我的猜题班讲义和最后的救命班的课件中已经交代了饼状图的描述方式。
针对这篇文章，三个段落的写作分别如下：
第一段描述这个饼状图，包括其中各自的数据组成，并且可以将其中最大的一部分即新年礼物的数据突出。最后再简要地交代一句，尽管数字看似孤立，但是数字之间紧密联系。
第二段的写法多种多样，如果针对这种送新年礼物的风气进行评析，可以作为一个负面话题来分析原因或者举例子；也可以作文一个正面话题来谈论，谈一谈这种人际交往的形式--互送礼物，增强朋友家人的感情；甚至可以作为一个中立话题来谈一谈假期开销在不同的方面，消费方式的多种多样。
第三段的写法就是传统地预测一下趋势，对这个事情简要评析一下，在对多姿多彩的社会和假期生活憧憬一下即可。
在单词的考察方面较难的单词也不过是居民（citizen , resident ）和消费（consume, consumption）。其他的单词就比较简单，包括聚会（party , reunion） ，交通（traffic）、新年礼物（gifts）、其他（others）。
【参考范文】
The pie chart above presents the different proportion of residents' consumption in a Chinese city during Spring Festival. To be specific, the percentage of consumption on New Year's gifts, party, traffic and others is 40%, 20% , 20% and 20% respectively. Surprisingly, the pertinent number about gifts is 40%. Isolated as the figures seem to be, they are connected to one another closely.
Undoubtedly, the purpose of the graph is to showcase the diversity of residents' consumption during holidays in China, especially over-consumption on gifts as a frequent way of interpersonal communication. What exactly contribute to this phenomenon? It's a thought-provoking question. First and foremost, advertisements of mass media, such as radio, television and Internet, might be misleading. Plus, pertinent action taken by the public to put an end to this trend might be little and limit. Therefore, people, men and women, old and young, in mounting numbers are spending too much on holiday gift which floods everywhere.
To sum up, there is an upward tendency for people these days to spend money on festival presents rather than other things, which I believe will not change in a short time. To reverse the trend is not a piece of cake, which requires a good awareness of consumption value and interpersonal communication. Only in this way can we have colorful festivals and relaxing times.
名师档案：潘赟
昵称"小潘潘"，自号"巡山大王"，南京大学&美国威斯康辛大学麦迪逊分校双硕士，新东方合肥学校国内考试部英语写作"押题王"，2014年成功押中考研英语写作大小作文，2013年12月和2014年6月/12月成功押中六级写作。
教授课程：考研写作、六级写作、托福写作
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